Analysis, Lit Review, Evaluation Essay

Published: 2018-04-24 11:41:12
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Carnegie Mellon University
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Global Warming Destructive Process

I have through my project report on global and upon sober judgment decided that it needed a few changes so as to make it more informing without losing focus on the main topic.

First, at the introduction initially, I had mentioned that global warming is a destructive process that may make this earth inhabitable in the few years to come. The primary cause of this increase in temperatures is the accumulation of greenhouse gasses in the atmosphere. In the revision, I explain how these gasses bring about this high temperature by preventing earth's radiation from escaping into space. I also talk about some effects of the process that endanger human life. These are important aspects that had been left behind. 

Human Actions of Negligence that Have Made The World What It is Today

I also find it significant to note that it is human actions of negligence that have made the world what it is today bringing out an imbalance between activities that release greenhouse gasses to and those that absorb or remove greenhouse gasses from the atmosphere. Another addition is that men can reverse the menace by avoiding practices that deposit harmful gasses to the air and embracing environment-friendly energy sources. On the roles of natural forces, I also mention that humans have the upper hand in ensuring that nature is conserved because it reduces carbon dioxide from the atmosphere especially vegetation cover. 

Lastly, on the measures governments have taken, I mention a few practices states are encouraged to use to reduce the amount of harmful gasses released to the atmosphere. These include setting up systems or plants for harnessing energy from renewable sources like wind, water, geothermal, or solar energy. 

I believe these changes make my paper more informing and specific in addressing global warming. I look forward to hearing your point of view about the revision.


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